Mad Libby – I like the concept, the story itself is isn’t bad either.
Mad Monday – Incomplete, but a lot of fun, the poor Dad in this situation is in a LOT of trouble.
Mad Scientists’ Convention — The Welcome Mat – A fun little story, I hope they make it to stores this fall I have a friend who seriously needs to relax.
Mad, but not Angry – Some nice humor and some nice MC. Sometimes labels can be REALLY important.
Made to Order – Long but well written, I thoroughly enjoyed how it played out.
The Madman and the Guinea Pigs – What can I say, Mad science and a humorous ending.
Magic Hands – I was surprised I enjoyed this one but it pushed the right buttons apparently
The Magic of Kris P. Kringle – A bit deviant, a bit fun, we’ll call it Christmas themed evil.
Magic Sperm – Yep, I knew it, never trust your sperm.
The Magical Camera – When you have you MC fun, always make sure that anyone you include can’t hijack your evil.
The Magical Charm Bracelet – A nice little story with varying types of control/manipulation through a magical charm bracelet.
Magical Cream? – Enjoyable, simple but enjoyable admittedly, if this guy keeps using the cream his cock is going to end up thick as a tree trunk and totally useless.
Magical Mystery Tourist – A tad predictable to those of us who are evil hypnotists, but still quite fun and nicely humiliating.
Magical Tramp Poon’s Vacation – Oddly enough, I never want to be THAT guy, maybe 10% of him, but not that guy.
Maid, to Order – A very nice little story about subliminal reprogramming
The Maiden in the Tower – I don’t believe this qualifies as MC really, the story was fun, I guessed where it was going pretty early on but enjoyed the ending anyway.
The Mail Order Bride – Not bad, an important lesson to learn, don’t let your twin brother meet your Mail Order Bride first.
Make a Wish – A nice little wish based MC story with some good sex and some good fun.
Makin Changes – The transformation to slut was a bit fast but it’s a good read and I enjoyed chapter 4 the most.
Making the Best of a Bad Situation – I enjoyed how the author told the tale. A fun way to let the controlee know they’re in trouble.
Making the Perfect Girlfriend – This story was REALLY hot, the desire to make her GF more aggressive resulting in the GF making her her slave was fun. Good sex too.
Making Them Do Things: The Contest – This is good hypno-MC, there’s a lot of hypnosis in it, it’s practically a guide to how to subvert someone via hypnosis. Mountain Man knows his hypnosis(and MC)
Malaking Suso Resort and Spa – Fairly long story about a woman turned into a cow. Pretty decent.
The Male Is In the Czech – A fun little story with a bad punchline 🙂
The Man at the Library – Curiosity kils more cats than killacat.com but only barely. Still be careful.
The Man in the Park – I like the way these are written, each is from the point of view of the victim where they don’t even realize exactly what is happening as they change and the MCer is just some creepy guy staring at them in the park.
Manual Override – Mikey gets his first Pet – Nicely written, but I think our young Master may have his hands full with this one.
Mapping a New World – A very nice hypnotic slavery story, I enjoyed it.
Marcus’s Power – The story is well written but not nearly complete. Not quite enough sex, and it REALLY needs to be proofread, I almost quit just because of spelling.
Marinara Hospital – Great humor, good sex and definitely a solid Mad Scientist.
The Mark of Power – Another good story that is incomplete.
Market Day – An enjoyable little story about taking your slaves to market
Marriage Counceling – Definitely the right type of marriage counselor
Mashiekeh – ARGH!!! I was enjoying this story a LOT, but yet again we come to a story with no conclusion.
Massage Parlor – A very nice little massage based MC story where the massage takes the woman well over the edge.
Massaged By My Nerdy Brother – Nicely done, and actually has an ending.
The Master Downstairs – I nice story about an accidental Master who tries to put things right and has some fun.
Master PC – The legendary Master PC story. it’s well done and enjoyable but for the most part not my cup of tea. I won’t be reviewing any other stories in the genre.
Master PC — Conditional Slavery – I generally avoid Master PC stories because guy wants X guy gets it without trying. This story had depth as he broke her and made her his perfect slave.
Master’s Kiss – Sorry folks, the sexy MC happened before the story started, this is a fixing what was done story which has a nice bit about deprogramming that might work in some instances.
Matching Madison – a little competition is a GOOD thing.
Matters of Perspective – I like the way this man thinks 🙂
May Cause Swelling – A very fun little story about why you should always read the side effects of any medication you take.
May I Show You Something – A quick little MC story that was pretty decent.
Me and Jiulio – Not bad, a lot of gang stories put me off(guess I’m too middle class), but this one was the right level of MC and fun
Me So Horny – An odd transformation to say the least, but it looks like her Boss is happy.
Mean Teen, Magic Marble and the Principal – Mean, probably even evil, but still enjoyable.
Mechanic’s Lien – Manipulated by the needs of your own body, simple and fun. Not a ton of sex
Medallion – Not a bad story, but sometimes limitless power gets a little boring. Chapter 2 is by far the best(bit of revenge)
Meetings With the Boss – this one is good, you can see the character crumbling around her desires not even realizing she’s being changed.
Megan’s New Clothes – a fun one where the clothes literally make the woman.
Melting Ice – I enjoyed this one even if it was fairly simple.
Membership Dues – This was a fun story, a little light on the sex but I enjoyed it a lot. I don’t think the author(Whyte, Colleen) has written since 2007 and that is a shame.
Memories of her Boyfriend – Very well done story about a toy that remembers who she was and realizes she wants to be who she is now.
Men Like It Better with a Blue Bonnet On It – definitely a slow burn, a conversion that is not instant and involves a very 50’s housewife attitude.
Mental Security Guaranteed – I want to see the product reviews on this
Merchandise – She makes such excellent merchandise
Mesmer’s Daughters – I believe I’ve read this story before, the words seem so familiar but it could be coincidence. A trance based conversion story.
Mexican Fly – A good start, but once again no real finish.
Michael’s New Pets – A nice little enslaved by implants story. Fun
The Midnight Ride of Paula Revered – A fun little variant on Cinderella
Milk and Honey – Not my usual, but I enjoyed the impregnation theme.
Mind – Incomplete, but well written and quite enjoyable.
A Mind Apart – Pretty traditional MC, man gets powers in hospital, finds some toys and then things get complicated.
Mind Contagion – I enjoyed this story quite a bit, it could use another part or two but they aren’t necessary, it’s complete enough.
Mind Control Dust – quick and easy, and ALWAYS make sure your victims have no way out.
Mind Control on a Saturday Night – This is a good story about fantasies fulfilled even if the participant wasn’t exactly willing.
Mind Control Party – Fun story, pay careful attention to the interlude in the middle.
The Mind Control Tales – Kinda middle of the road, his “revenge” isn’t that drastic and he’s not that evil.
Mind Field – Not bad, incomplete but not bad it at least goes far enough to be enjoyable
Mind Fuck – This one is just plain GOOD, one of the best I’ve read in a while. I’m surprised no one else has listed it as a favorite. Well done Zebulon it’s a shame you haven’t written more.
Mind Games – This one’s very nicely evil, a voice in her head telling her she’s his and gets no choice. Not sure she’ll ever enjoy it but it’s MC and that tends to be NC 🙂
Mind Games (Gingerxxx) – Kinda a rough start, but a pretty good story with plenty of hot MC. Definitely VERY long.
Mind Wipe – A very playful little story about getting women to think with their pussies
Minor Sexual Sins – Not bad, twisted Philosopher manipulates minds from beyond the grave 🙂
Miranda Violation – Nicely written and quite enjoyable.
Miranda Warning – Very hot and a wicked ending.
The Mirror (Interstitial) – Careful what you search for, sometimes it finds you first.
Misfortune’s Bracelet – Well written and fun, but as with all magic like this, be careful!
Miss Titus’ Day Off – Fairly predictable, but some good sex
Miss You – No, nothing creepy here, nope, just move along(good story though)
Model Behavior – I enjoyed the body swap, but haughty girl brought low is always a fun subject.
Modified – Nice conversion story, I’m sure she needed it
Modified Behavior – Nice human to pet story, well done and enjoyable
Mona’s Makeover (Paladin) – A nice slow transformation from frumpy to sexy not a ton of actual sex
Money Shot – Well written, but I’m never a fan of the ones that make a strong point of destroying a relationship.
MOO! – An amusing cow transformation with a good dose of humiliation.
Mood Enhancement – Just a nice safe little experiment here, nothing more. 🙂
Mood Musak – Yet another important lesson for the young MCer, make sure you ONLY get your intended target(s)
A More Permanent Position – a decent humiliation/revenge story, would be nice if there were more struggle on the victims part.
Morgana’s Day Spa – An enjoyable story with an amusing twist at the end. The Epilogue is entirely unnecessary but fun.
Morgana’s Gift – Not much MC but an enjoyable story
Morning Heat – A fun little dog transformation hypnosis scenario
Morningview Psychiatric Hospital – Beneficial MC to help the unbalanced, not a bad story but could probably use 1 more chapter.
Mother’s Motor’s Running Hot – I like the prank call aspect.
Mountin’ Biking – Pretty good, needed to be a little longer before the good guys won.
Mr Carruthers’ Garden – A very special garden indeed.
Mr. Bankole – Interesting premise, I kinda like the story
Mr. Dick Head – Ok, I shouldn’t have, but I liked this one.
Mr. Poe – Beware of MCers with gifts, they may be more fucked up than you.
Mrs. Arrogant Tamed & Mrs. Arrogant Tamed 2 – Some stories should just be combined into a single entity. Still, these are both quite hot stories about a bitch and her sister that get thoroughly tamed.
Music of the Night – Loved all the Beatles references and the content. A shame he never did the sequels he mentioned.
My best friend – Nice hot story, but way too short.
My Boyfriend Is Such a Liar – Be careful about bets made with hypnotists and mind controllers.
My Bratty Brother – Not bad, kinda middle of the road, some decent humiliation.
My Brief Career – Very fun little story about a Mind Controller who gets in out of his depth.
My Car, My Rules – Temptation can be evil, in this case VERY evil(in a good way)
My Career as a Wizard – Not bad, but a bit… mechanical…not sure if that’s the word but there’s no emotion, just action.
My Descent Into Lesbian Tit Slavery – A very nice lactation enslavement that’s pretty hot.
My Favorite Virus – Nicely written, definitely a scenario where things get out of control but in a good way. Could probably use another chapter or two but I don’t see that happening.
My Four Aces – A little love, a little sex, a little MC, a little revenge. Works for me!
My Imaginary Friend – Ok, I have to admit, I really like his imaginary friend, and both parts were very fun.
My Late Uncle’s Gadgets – Very hot, the machine in this is definitely something I’d want to use on a few people I know.
My Mind Is Gone – Jukebox really is very good at this, VERY enjoyable.
My New Boyfriend – Not sure why but I enjoyed this story, may have just been my mood as the MC was obvious and simple.
My New Career – This sequel to My Brief Career and is wonderfully fun and a good laugh, sadly, there’s not really any good sex but very well done D. Holzer I look forward to reading more of your work.
My New Girlfriend (Ice Bear) – An interesting story, where the guy has no idea why the girl is SO dedicated to him.
My Real Estate Career – Sequel to My New Career and My Brief Career, another fun story.
My Sister’s Captive – Definitely working on twisted, needs more parts but was started last year so who knows.
My Wife, the Professor – A very nice story(and an excellent gift) Sadly, unfinished.
My Wife’s Surprise – More husbands need surprises like this 🙂
My Wife’s Therapist – Not bad, hate to say it but the husband’s kind of a dick and no revenge against the Therapist happens